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How Do I Choose Book Titles?

If you’re like me, you might feel as though there are some titles that just “come” to you, and others you might painstakingly mull over for months before finally conceding to one that will just do. That is certainly how my brain has worked in this process!

“Wouldn’t a book title generator make this all easier?” you ask? NO. I mean, no. Perhaps book title generators could get you started with finding good keywords, but there is a lot more thought that should go into book titles. The book title, besides the cover, is going to be the first thing a reader sees. Readers do judge a book by its cover, and titles generated by an AI will likely not appeal as much as one carefully crafted by the author.

There are a few ways to at least get you started. These are important factors for helping you when looking for book title ideas:

1. Genre

What kind of genre does The Warriors of Bhrea make you think of? “Warrior” might invoke images of epic battles or swords or armor, and “Bhrea” is an entirely made up word that might ignite the imagination, making the reader wonder “What is that? I want to find out more!” All put together, it is meant to invoke an epic fantasy feel.

Your title should be in line with other books of the genre. Lair of Terror would not be a good title for a light-hearted romance novel. …On second thought, that actually sounds pretty awesome. 😎 I’d read it at least.

2. Length

There is a happy medium between one-worded, generic titles and what seems like an entire novel being on the title page.

Think of it like your desired reader. What will they remember? That is the most important factor. It may be longer or shorter, but as long as it is memorable, your reader will be able to find it or find themselves drawn to it.

Adding a subtitle creates a little lee-way as well—for instance, my overall series is named The Warriors of Bhrea, but each separate book has its own unique subtitle that sets the tone for that individual book.

3. Complexity

Keep it simple. You are drawing readers in—the more complex details can be in the description. You don’t need a thesaurus to come up with a good title.

When deciding my title, my goal was that the key words, “warriors” and “Bhrea” would make the potential reader wonder: “What is Bhrea? What does it mean to be a warrior of Bhrea?” While “Bhrea” is an unusual word, it is also not a complex word. It doesn’t overwhelm the reader with crazy symbols and accent marks to turn off their interest.

Now that we’ve got the basics, how do you actually choose a title?

My personal favorite way to go about deciding a title is to choose something from your book that is not necessarily in the forefront of the action, but is still central to the story. What is driving your story? What will introduce a little mystery as to what your book is about, and as readers go through it, they say “Aha! That’s what this is really about!”

If you’ve read The Lost King, you might have noticed that the titular character was not the main character and did not have a huge role, but he in a way drove the story. If you don’t know what I’m talking about, well you better get yourself over to Amazon and find out!

The same is the case for The Master of Night. This character is not the main role, but she drives the plot.

Now, you don’t have to do it this way. This is just my personal favorite. By all means, make your main character the titular character. The title could also refer to a place, an event, an object, anything that somehow drives the story! All in all, I say find something that drives the story but doesn’t spell out the plot for your reader.

I hope this helps you get started on deciding a title. The title is important—so give it some thought! But also, don’t fret about it too much. When it doubt, test some titles with your friends, colleagues, and other potential readers. Their input will give you a lot of good information on what could work and what wouldn’t.

Things That Make Me Go Hmmmm 🤔

I consider myself a pretty open person. I like to entertain interesting ideas for the sake of entertaining them, though I also consider myself a skeptic of anything truly crazy. If something can be explained by simple, likely mechanisms, then that is probably the explanation.

However, some things really just make me go “hmmm.”

Take for example the Baalbek Trilithon.

Baalbek Trilithon - A Wall With Two Pasts | Miesta, Prírodné

An ancient Roman site dating back over 2,000 years, the Temple of Jupiter Baal has quite an interesting feature. The stones that form the base are known as the “trilithon,” a set of three enormous blocks of hewn stone that each weigh over 750 tons. That’s 1,500,000 pounds (or 680,388.56 kg for you anti-Imperial bastards). Each!

A similarly sized stone was even stranded, called The Stone of the Pregnant woman. That one weighs about 1,200 tons.

Baalbek Trilithon | Ancient origins, Ancient ruins, Megalithic ...

Scholars endlessly debate how Roman architects could have moved such large stones. Some say the foundation stones predate the Romans, or even those before, such as Alexander the Great.

If it wasn’t the Romans or Greeks, then who?

Obviously, it was aliens.

Anyway, this made me hmmm quite a bit. These huge stones fascinate me, as do other monolithic structures dotted throughout the world. How did ancient cultures move such massive stones? This YouTube channel digs deep into many different ancient sites (heh, get it?) and strives to find the answer based on the most evidence. His video on Baalbek is quite informative and sound with its arguments. Check it out!

What else makes me go hmmm?

The Boötes Void.

It simultaneously makes me go hmmm and eeek. A great bubble of emptiness found in the constellation of Boötes, it looks like…

THIS

Boötes void - Wikipedia

“Yawn,” you say. “A bunch of dots?”

I admit, this rendering does not really do the void justice.

Perhaps this one paints a better picture?

List of voids - Wikipedia

It is almost 330 million light-years across–a vast bubble of emptiness in which very, very few galaxies reside compared to our area of the universe. About 60 have been found within it.

To put it in perspective, if the Milky Way were in this void, we would have no idea that there were other galaxies until we developed powerful enough telescopes to detect anything outside of the Void.

Creepy.

Makes you rethink being scared of the dark, huh?

Of course, the Boötes Void has sparked many theories as to why it exists, ranging from smaller voids merging to…

You guessed it, aliens.

I mean, what if? Makes you go “hmmmm,” doesn’t it? Good thing it is 700 million light years away, right? You probably won’t live long enough for the galaxy-consuming alien race to come for us.

Probably.

This video does a great job explaining what Boötes Void is and why it’s so strange.

Those are just two things that have held my attention over the years. Many other things hold my attention occasionally…

Such as writing a sequel!

If you have not seen yet, I am calling Book 2 The Master of Night.

Stay tuned for more updates, such as a cover reveal!

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Until next time, I hope you are all well.

Tabby